The Official Writing Challenge
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This is the start of a great sermon or an amazing essay. The juxtaposition of our wasted abundance and their starving need was very disturbing. I would love to see this article carried through. This reads like the start of one, not a full one. Finish it please.

Miss Andre.
06/16/06
Definately, the start of a sermon. Very visual.
06/16/06
Wow, so sad, so true, but yes I would have loved for you to go on. Great descriptions.
06/18/06
You said it ALL in this brief story; just as the picture you saw spoke a thousand words to those who saw it. You don't need any more words to tell it like it is! Great job, great writing and right on target...Topic-wise! Kudos!