The Official Writing Challenge
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04/13/06
i Like this. have a little look at your scanning, but otherwise some great images. you might want to split up the stanzas to make it easier to read.
04/14/06
I agree, splitting up the verses would make it not only easier to read, but put more emphasis on each new thought. A very nice poetic way to fulfillment...I liked it.
I agree with splitting up the stanzas. It is a good read however.