The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/14
Wow - this touched my heart big time! Great job.

God bless~
There's a good story here and if you show instead of tell - it will become a great story.
There's lots of help on Faithwriters about this.
One picky thing (probably my old eyes) Double spacing the paragraphs really helps the readers.
Cheers! and keep writing!
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