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01/25/14
What a poignant and touching entry. The interaction between mom and daughter, along with the MCs internal thinking was "spot on" with the topic.

Nicely done.

God bless~
01/27/14
Their "Forward Planning" certainly made for a satisfying ending to your story. I completely enjoyed reading about all their investments and planning. Nice work.
This is a charming story. You do a nice job of showcasing the topic throughout the story. We never know when something horrible could happen and it's nice to be reminded that with God's help, we can get through the hard times. Nice job.
01/30/14
Congrats!!!

God bless~
01/30/14
Congratulations on your "highly commended." I highly agree. :-)