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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Winter (11/14/05)

TITLE: THE FUTURE
By sallie sisk
11/15/05


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As we sit on the porch swinging in our favorite swing that the first grandson gave us,we are
not talking at all. I wonder what is going thur your mind. It is winter now more ways than one. I look
at your beauitful silver white hair and think to myself.
Is this the same man that went and ask dad if he could marry me. Is this the same man I use to
laugh with and cry with.
Making love to you was so wonderful and now you sit and gaxe at me, like you don't know who
I am. All you know is that this is your favorite thing to do with me.
The mind is a strange thing they told me. Sometimes it just goes.
Trying to keep it from the children and being a nurse to you everday is not what I had planned
for us. GOD do you hear me when I cry for help. Do you do this to me for some reason.I know I
did wrong in the past ,but to see my true love die like this is so much to take.
M ama ' is it time for my ice cream and Dr.Pepper. Yes darling ,you sit right here and I will make
you the biggest ice cream, you've ever had.
Well, winter has come and gone and I'm sitting by myself and thinking how beautiful the white
clouds are that's rolling in.First winter alone,but GOD is here with me folding on to my hand, leading
me to you my true love and to the promise land. .


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Marilyn Schnepp 11/21/05
Truly a lovely story; but I would be amiss if I failed to be honest. You need to edit it more carefully...check spelling and typing. A very touching story.
Jan Ackerson 11/21/05
I agree with both the previous commenters. This is wonderfully written and heart-stirring, and would be even more so if edited carefully. I was very moved.
Margaret Goins11/23/05
Thank you for touching my heart with your story. Edit it to perfection.
Shelley Snyder11/24/05
I agree, with editing this would be a great story. It is very powerful and shows true love.
Alexandra Wilkin11/25/05
I think you must be describing the effect of Alzheimers, or something like it. Polish up the editing and sumit this as an article; this is powerful, emotional and touching and there will many who can relate to it. Beautiful work. God bless.
Nina Phillips11/25/05
That is truly something to hold on to. Very touching, and powerful story, that reaches out to many of us. God bless you, littlelight