The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
Truly a lovely story; but I would be amiss if I failed to be honest. You need to edit it more carefully...check spelling and typing. A very touching story.
11/21/05
I agree with both the previous commenters. This is wonderfully written and heart-stirring, and would be even more so if edited carefully. I was very moved.
Thank you for touching my heart with your story. Edit it to perfection.
I agree, with editing this would be a great story. It is very powerful and shows true love.
I think you must be describing the effect of Alzheimers, or something like it. Polish up the editing and sumit this as an article; this is powerful, emotional and touching and there will many who can relate to it. Beautiful work. God bless.
11/25/05
That is truly something to hold on to. Very touching, and powerful story, that reaches out to many of us. God bless you, littlelight