The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/05
Interesting. We all need to take the time to sit and drink in the world around us. To often we exist in the world but do not interact with it. A word: watch your punctuation. Nice piece:)
11/14/05
You painted a lovely picture to read. Watch out for little mistakes in grammar and punctuation. :) Thanks for sharing.
11/14/05
Very good descriptions. I enjoyed how you wrote your words.
11/15/05
Lots of great description. A few grammar and mechicanical errors to watch out for, but otherwise a well poised story full of feeling.