The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
Nice point brought out in your writing. Inspiring. :)
10/26/05
I liked the rhythm and pace. Thank you.
10/26/05
Good job! Your poetry felt at once unconventional and flowing. Thanks!
I really liked the flow of this at the start, but as it got closer to the end, it sort of lost that same flow from the first stanza. A really good piece, and I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing!
10/28/05
Overall good job. I think it could be strenthened by shortening it a bit. It flows well and is inspirational. Good luck with this poem. Karen