The Official Writing Challenge
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Aah.. what a sweet story, and even sweeter husband. This was a fun read - enjoyed it.
I love this! It's a very apt allegory, perfectly on topic, and the ending was just as sweet as can be for a week that practically insists on sad endings. Lovely.
I loved this fanciful story, witha cat, and a happy, surprise ending.
Oh my. That was so neat. I loved this story. You had me from beginning to end on this one.
Excellent story! Time to graduate to Advanced. :)
You drew me in and kept my attention. Loved the description of her age with the rocking of the chair to get up. Great writing.
I wish it hadn't ended so soon! This was great! I really liked the whole piece, from beginning to end. It's one of my favorites for this week, you did really good with the descriptions and the ending letter. Excellent writing! ^_^
Oh wow, great ending! I love this story. You did very well with this one.
Oh, I love this story, very creative. The ending is perfect. Excellent job on topic.
Absolutely creative. You swept me away into her world and taught an amazing lesson. Good stuff, Paula!
Not sure where this was headed, I absolutley loved the twist. SO CREATIVE. Keep up the good words.
Extra unordinary in a very good way. I loved it. I don't really care for dying Bill stories...but this was very good. Made me want more. Very good characterization and creative. God bless.
What a great story! I really enjoyed reading every word. I loved not knowing what was going on at first and then figuring it out as I read further along. A really fun and great read.
Wonderful story. Creative and engaging.