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09/08/07
This was very creative. I liked it a lot. We often think of meekness and boldness being opposites even thought they aren't.

There were a few punctuation errors, but nothing major.

Great job. Keep writing.
09/09/07
Your story is very interesting and well written. I like the characters and the dialog in your entry. Good job!
Yes, in fact I think it is meekness, true meekness, that makes boldness possible. As we submit to God we become transparent, the better for His light to shine through. Good article and nice presentation.