The Official Writing Challenge
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I was with you all the way, but the ending needs a little more impact. Thanks for sharing and well done. chris x
09/05/07
What a delightfully-told story about you and your dog! It does perfectly illustrate how fear can get ahold of us and of how difficult it can be to break free from it! I liked your descriptions of the different ways you tried to help K.C., and I appreciated your excellent message! Good job! :)
09/05/07
P.S. I forgot to leave the suggestion that in the future you leave spaces between your paragraphs for easier reading. :)