The Official Writing Challenge
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You expressed so beautifully in verse the thoughts I myself have had from time to time. Human, earthly embarrassment cannot begin to compare in weight to spiritual embarrassment before our Lord.
07/27/07
This is an excellent poem and it's also very thought-provoking. Really liked reading this.
07/29/07
I really like this poem, you might consider another title though.
This is a beautiful poem! Congratulations on 2nd place in intermediate. Welcome to Advanced. Good job!
08/02/07
Congratulations on your win.
This is beautiful...I pray I will not be ashamed....