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By Becky Depp
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When you came home
You came in screaming
I thought I was dreaming.
You lifted your hand
My face was on fire
You came after me again
I called you a big fat liar.
Your anger raged
you reached for a glass
I reached for the chair
I heard you swear.
You threw the glass
Shattering in pieces
You stared at me
As your anger decreases.
I felt warmth trickle
My hand reached
I felt the blood
It felt like a flood.
I grabbed my bags
I'm walking out
I’m done with you
I won't be back, I shout.
You fell to your knees
You cried like a baby
Please don't go
I told you no.
You have abused me
All our years together
I’m done with it all
I’m tired of your squall.
I slowly walked
Right out the door
And I didn't turn back
As I left you on the floor.
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Very moving and sad poem, with an absolutely authentic voice.