The Official Writing Challenge
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04/30/15
Awww. I loved this story. Great message too!

God bless~
05/02/15
Good job showing the personalities of Grandpa and Abby. I enjoyed this story.
05/08/15
Your story brings several things to my mind today that I need to be mindful of. It reminds me of just how deep the roots of truth can grown when planted in a young heart. The Papa in your story imparts his seeds of wisdom with assurance and they land on tender soil. Your message speaks well of the impression our life can make from generation to generation. Your introduction caught my attention and pulled me into the story enough to want to see how it ended. I like exchange of conversation. The only thing I would have liked to have seen in the story was a little better depiction of the painting. I was almost as curious about it as the little girl and yet I felt that there was something missing in the telling. Even so I received the message. I enjoyed it and think it was well written.