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Topic: Spring (as in the season) (11/28/05)
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TITLE: The Sweet Chirp Song | Previous Challenge Entry
By Helen Harris
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but I don’t think they really sing then. I don’t know
why I seem to take birds for granted during wintertime.
They probably sing their song during wintertime too.
They seem to just sit up high and fly high above the
earth in the sky. God gives us their sweet songs to
sing in winter and then comes Spring…
But, when every thing begin to bloom, and the colors begin
to come so Vivid. Birds let out their loudest chord, Singing
Spring is Here. You can hear their song from the highest
treetop. It seem like every tee is filled with birds singing
their song of Thanksgiving, Praising and Thanking
God for giving Spring…
Winter can bring its beauty too: Like the cozy warmth you
feel by the flicking fireplace. Wrapped up in your favorite
blanket eating pop corn and drinking hot cocoa. Winter gives
Thanksgiving and Chrisman, family and friend celebrating the
Season and the Reason, giving Thanks to God for all
Blessings, and then comes Spring…
The seasons, birds and Spring are all of God’s
wonderful Creation…
Thank you God
Genesis 1:20 NIV
And God said, “Let the water teem with living
creatures, and let birds fly above the earth
across the expanse of the sky”
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You are so Right. I was still in the winter mode. ( : I rushed and enter it and let Microsoft Word correct it, sometimes Microsoft Word is not always right.
Your Comments are so Appreciated. I totally need to work on these things and I will before I do any more Challenge Writing.
We learn so much from your Comments. Keep up the Good work Guys.
I got Chrisman for Christmas (LOL) I will keep on writing and get better.
Thanks again.
God's Blessing, Helen
I am not giving up.
Thanks again.
God's Blessing. With Love, Helen
Looks like everyone has already pointed out to your grammar, spelling or off-the-topic mistakes. So I don't think it it is necessary for me to pin-point.
Apart from that, it is nice to note courage, in that, you are not disheartened by the comments. Willingness to want to share in Jesus in different forms, perhaps in poetry or prose, is an excellent way of witnessing.
It's okay to make mistakes as long as you take note of it and try to correct it if you feel you should.
Jesus loves you... He always has and always will.
love you in Jesus..... Mandy