The Official Writing Challenge
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Like your portrayed relationship, this article was short but deep. I like that the editor is a positive person in the writer's life; too often we want to see them as the villain. Good!
06/05/10
Your language is so lovely - great descriptions, and a lot of punch with a short piece. Enjoyed this.
I loved how you portrayed the relationship between author and editor. Very well written. Thank you and God bless.
06/08/10
I liked this, as I've been a 'faceless' editor many times.

I was expeciting you to take this one step farther--to make a spiritual or life application. You had lots of word left, and you're a good writer!