The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/15
This is adorable! I really enjoyed it.

To make it easier to read, put a space between the paragraphs.

Keep writing.
11/16/15
This was cute but needs white space.
11/17/15
I enjoyed reading this story through the eyes of a mouse! Great idea! I like how you held his character through his eyes! Good Job!
11/18/15
You portrayed Buddy's emotions very clearly and you told your story in a charming way.