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12/05/13
You make a great point with this article. We must be on our guard against the wiles of our adversary the devil, for our sin is indeed a red flag to that bull.
12/05/13
Great message, and timely reminders to all.

Good job.

God bless~
12/05/13
You did a wonderful job, well done. Keep writing.
12/08/13
You stated your points well. And expressed your beliefs creatively. Keep submitting!
12/09/13
Good use of foreboding inner dialogue regarding our spiritual enemy Satan. One sentence you might consider re-wording is "For if I do not want to wrestle with this enemy it would be best to flee iniquity." I was not exactly sure how to interpret this sentence in relation to the sentence previous to it.
All in all, I am looking forward to reading more of your work!
12/09/13
Hungrily he awaits for my hand to take, earnestly he yearns for my foot to slip

Truer words were never written. I like your style and your passion. Keep up the good work!