The Official Writing Challenge
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You make a great point with this article. We must be on our guard against the wiles of our adversary the devil, for our sin is indeed a red flag to that bull.
Great message, and timely reminders to all.

Good job.

God bless~
You did a wonderful job, well done. Keep writing.
You stated your points well. And expressed your beliefs creatively. Keep submitting!
Good use of foreboding inner dialogue regarding our spiritual enemy Satan. One sentence you might consider re-wording is "For if I do not want to wrestle with this enemy it would be best to flee iniquity." I was not exactly sure how to interpret this sentence in relation to the sentence previous to it.
All in all, I am looking forward to reading more of your work!
Hungrily he awaits for my hand to take, earnestly he yearns for my foot to slip

Truer words were never written. I like your style and your passion. Keep up the good work!