The Official Writing Challenge
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04/17/13
Good reminder for us to trust the Lord. Thank you.
So sorry for your loss, and happy for your gain.

You write well. Paragraphing will enhance this. You have a poignant story to tell.
04/18/13
This was so powerful, the emotions were palpable. Excellent job with equating "jumping into the water" with trusting God. I loved how you used the topic, and how you pulled it together so well, in so few words. That's a sign of a great writer, being able to tell a tale, hit the beginning middle and end, with equal parts of interest.

Thank you for sharing this story. I too lost my best friend, a little over three years ago, and I still miss her, everyday..I send you my heartfelt condolences.

May God Bless and comfort you~