The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/13
This really brings home the point that you not only need to share Jesus with others but sometimes we do not get a second chance to receive Jesus. Take the opportunity when you can. Don't wait!

A thought-provoking piece that I appreciate you sharing.
Wow! That is my highest praise. I absolutely love that way you handled the topic in this piece. I think this is an excellent example of writing on topic. If we were to take away the note and any line relating to it, your article would crumple, so it shows how well on topic this poem is. Next, we have the beginning which is a great draw. I wanted to read more. Your transition from one part to the next was smooth and your ending, though haunting, really makes the reader open her eyes. This is an exquisite bit of poetry so again I say Wow!
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