The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Awwww! This was so beautiful, so touching and so informative. I simply loved this direct and powerful piece that spoke directly to my heart.

Thank you Sir for writing this... I am so thrilled how God blessed you, and I bet your wife LOVES YOU right back! You are a sweetheart.

God Bless you!
05/04/12
There should be more men like you; willing to listen to God's commands and act upon them. You refer in your story as being a "widow." A woman is a widow when she loses a husband, but a man is a widower. The only glitch I saw. Nicely done!
This is really lovely. My heart hurt when you described the tragedy. I liked how the MC found happiness again and didn't live in the sorrow. That's something I have to remind myself to do. I smiled about the men vs women part and think you have that right on the head (at least for most people).Nicely done.
05/10/12
Congratulations and God Bless~
Congratulations on ranking 21 overall!