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09/16/10
Novel use of the "diet" concept. You've "challenged" us all to gain "weight."
What a wonderful way to get fat! I enjoyed the way you swiftly compared God's word with different nutrients our bodies require. Well done, I really enjoyed this piece.
09/18/10
Good challenge to concentrate less on the outer and more on our inner person. The effect would likely be lifechanging.
09/18/10
I found myself nodding as I began to read since, as I edge towards menopause, find myself fighting the "battle of the bulge" with increasing intensity. I coudl relate. But then you really caught my attention with your line about "gaining weight." My head snapped up and I wondered what you were going to have to say next.

This was delightful and I doubt I'll be able to look at my expanding waistline without remembering the need to also "gain weight."

Good writing!
I like this! What an interesting take on the topic. Nicely done!
Congratulations for placing 12th in your level!
09/24/10
Congratulations, my dear friend. I'm so proud of you. This was a winner for sure.