The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful story! I love it. Keep writing!
This is such a great story. Your charming characters pulled me right n.
What a well-written story from a beginner at that. You need to be on a higher level if this is what you've been writing. "Yep, sure do!"

I loved this; took me back down south to eastern Kentucky and those long hot summers. Very descriptive and would love to read the "whole story". You got a talent here for writing, for sure. :)
Loved the language of the South. Very well written, and really held my attention.
This story made me smile. I love the tobacco spit repetition. Wonderful writing!
Jody, this is just excellent on so many levels.
What a quaint, believable, loving and on-topic entry!
You have something very special going on with your writing. I want to read more from you.