The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
That was interesting the way you logged and kept the journal. Nicely written, kept me in suspense. God bless ya, littlelight
07/28/05
Wow. I really enjoyed this article. It kept my attention clear to the last line. What an experience.
07/31/05
Well written - nice use of time line to keep it moving.
The clips from throughout the two days set the stage well. Nice, realistic drama.