The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 763 times
Member Comments
This is a good reminder that not everyone has a happy Christmas.
Beautifully written. I felt your compassion for all who have lost a loved one.
Very well done - you took us with you into the emotions and the healing - I'd like to adopt those kids! Real and touching.
This is a touching tale. I enjoyed your telling of it, however I think you could improve it with better paragraph divisions and more careful placement of commas. I'd like to read more about the kids. Keep up the great work!
This is a touching story of grief and moving on. I felt drawn to this family. Nicely done.
Bittersweet, and very touching.
Hi Norms,

Congratulations on your placement.I really enjoyed this story. It is nice to see you getting back into the swing of things. Love to you, Dave and the family,