The Official Writing Challenge
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06/08/05
Thank you for your message, indeed we are all washed in the blood of Jesus. As a suggestion, you might have a friend "peer edit" your work to clear out the minor glitches.
06/08/05
I applaud you for sharing your thoughts. Some spots didn't flow real smoothly. Conveying our feelings clearly takes time to learn. I agree about having someone edit your work. Keep writing, though. I would love to read more from you.
Blessings, Lynda
06/09/05
I agree with dub and Lynda. You have a good premise here that just needs some technical tweeking. KEEP GOING. You are on the right track! :0)
06/10/05
Very creative - I can almost see the Shout sitting up there as an object lesson :)