The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the Story thanks for sharng.
06/08/05
A very good story. Thank you, I enjoyed the reading.
06/08/05
Very nicely done and with a good message.
What a wonderful story which conveys the love of Jesus Christ. Very well done. Congratulations, keep up your talent. May God bless you.
06/10/05
I love the way it all tied together -from the answer machine messages that weren't there -to the message that she did get -the one that counted most!
06/10/05
Good ending; great message. The beginning was a little hard for me to follow, though. For example, it would have been clearer, and more representative of people's thought patterns, if you used "has" in place of "had" in the sentence: "This had been an absolutely impossible bad day," Cecelia thought. Also, reword some of your sentences to cut down on the use of "helping verbs." That will make your writing stronger.
I liked your title. I wondered, "Why 0?" Explained very well. Nice job.