The Official Writing Challenge
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11/25/07
Superb last line, and I like the progression in this piece.
11/25/07
You have so many experiences to draw from. This was very interesting. I like your move into the electronic age:) Thank you for sharing!
Laury
11/29/07
Love that last line.
What amazing and intersting experiences. With the rest I love the last line!!!