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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: New Year (05/09/05)

TITLE: Newness on wing...
By Juanita Pittman-Brown
05/09/05


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What lies
Within the days
We are yet to see --
As the sun pierces
The sky
And covers the day
Until the mellow eve...
Would it be
Joy beyond
Your own belief --
Would it be difficulty
Without apparent
Relief --
Would it be happiness
Not yet known --
Would it be the result
Of words and deeds
Sown --
Would it be fruit
From the kindness
Tree --
Would it be confinement
Because of your lack
Of honesty --
Would it be
Dreams that do come
True --
Would it be
Responses
To words and deeds
Made by me and you --
Would it be the answer
To life's mystery --
Would it be revelation
Of the purpose of
Your worldly journey --
Would it be the smile
Of a child
On a sunny dreamy
Morn --
Would it be the warmth
Of true love
Which was to be
Discovered
Between your Heavenly
Rise and the day
You were born...
Would it be
That the new year
Holds the KEY
To your destiny --
And after this
Earthly walk
You will be welcomed
By your Holy Father's
Embrace --
Where you will find
PERFECT PEACE
In newness on wing
As you are delivered
By God's Holy
GRACE...


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Helga Doermer05/18/05
I liked the potential of possibilities imparted in the first part of the poem.
Karen Deikun05/19/05
Quite a nice poem. Beautiful pictures of possibilities. I thought you did well.
Amy Michelle Wiley 05/22/05
Lovley poem!
Deborah Porter 05/23/05
Well done Juanita! Congratulations on your 1st place win in the Level 1 Challenge. With that, it's time to move up to Level. You'll be fine. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)