The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/07
I really enjoyed this. You made it sound like i was listening in on a converstation i've heard before. Good job.
What a courageous character Jessie is! I love her, the dialouge, the setting, everything was great-so realistic! My only note is the thought might work better in italics-and breaths-should be breathes, correct? ^_^ Very well done, I enjoyed the read!
This is nicely written. The conversation flows naturally and carries the story along smoothly. Well done!
07/30/07
Wow, you really had me involved in the conversations and in your MC's inner debate. Very good story!