The Official Writing Challenge
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05/10/07
A very moving and encouraging story. Loved the letter! well done.
Wonderful story. Very well written.
What a horrible thing to live through. You told the story well. Keep writing.
05/16/07
Touching and inspiring--I like the letter format, too.
05/16/07
I like the setting here. It's contemporary and modern, making it easy for the reader to connect, work a little more on your dialouge for it to sound more realistic. Reading the piece out loud helps! ^_^ Otherwise, this wasn nice, the letter format was a great choice!
05/16/07
I like this. I think I would have used a few different words here and there. But overall this shows great promise!
05/16/07
This was an excellent way to get your point across. Being a lover of the letter style i thought this was very well done.
05/17/07
I like the letter format - the letter was definitely the strongest part of this piece. The ending, in my opinion, was a bit weak, but still got your point across. Very nice!
05/17/07
He is always faithful, indeed. I look forward to more of your inspired writing.