The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/06
Great piece with a wonderful lesson. Well done.
08/09/06
A very beautiful and moving story. I like the honesty and clarity of your writing. As I say often, I don't predict winners, but for what it is worth, your story is one of my favorites. You did well presenting the essence of your story. Your mechanics will improve. But, you have the gift of communictaing your heart and that is not easily learned. Be encouraged!! God bless.