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TITLE: How's Your Day?
By David Huckabay Jr
03/24/07
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This was a poem I wrote to my wife from work via e-mail. Please offer feedback, good or bad and let me know how I cold improve, thanks.
How’s Your Day?
By D.L. Huckabay Jr.

How’s your day so far?
Wished you made a wish upon that star?
Couldn’t do that with clouds up and out?
But don’t worry or even pout.

My dear wife, your dreams are for us to gain,
The essence of what is for us to attain.
If we focus on He who spawned such a dream,
‘Tis better than coffee with thy favorite cream,
Blessings flow to obedience abide,
When all we do is in Him we confide.

Through the clouds shines the Morning Star,
Now, my dear wife, how’s the day thus far?
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