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TITLE: The Darkness Behind Closed Eyes
By Ennis Smith
11/19/11
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I close my eyes and I see

Nothing

There is a darkness that consumes all light

Any shred of hope, wishful thinking, and promises, have dissipated

There is nothing in the darkness

Happiness scatters; joy flees

In the darkness there is nothing

Fear resides here; shame; a pain that aches deep within the soul

This is the realm of the demon; this is his domain

Here in the darkness, he holds me captive

I am forced to hear his words; to listen to his lies

In the absence of the truth, my ears clamor to believe anything

In the darkness destruction is assured.

But somewhere…deep within the bowels of the darkness, I hear a voice

A voice of hope; a voice of instruction

It tells me to hang on, just a little while longer

For the darkness cannot last forever.

Somewhere in the deep, I hear hope

Hope tells me, “Open your eyes, and see”.

I open my eyes

And there is light.
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