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TITLE: My uncle
By William Hynd
03/22/09
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A child is worried that people will be critical of his uncle's behaviour in church.
The days my uncle took me to church
We didn't go in
He smoked at the door.
Until it began.
We sat at the back, he didn't sing.
The pastor talked of original sin
While uncle's feet scraped the floor.
He wouldn't sit still, he shuffled about.
Coffee? no sir, this kid's to go home.
But I admired him so much and I had no doubt.
My uncle loves God I wanted to shout.
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