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TITLE: Dreams...wishes
By Sharne Mostert
06/29/08
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this was one of the first poems I ever wrote.
I dream of things that yet seem far
I dream of things some cannot see
I dream of peace and hope and love
For every human being.

I wish that everyone could have
The courage to believe without seeing
The strength to stand come what may
And the power to know what’s right.

I dream to see that everyone cares,
For what the next is going through.
I dream of a place where everyone lives
In harmaony with each other.
I dream to see no more tears and no more pain
No more heartbreak and no more suffering

I wish everyone could know
The one that can make all these things come true
The one that can mend a broken heart
And give strength that only He can give.
I wish that everyone could know my Savior
Jesus!
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