THE CRITIQUE CIRCLE
BACK TO
CRITIQUE CIRCLE
INSTRUCTIONS
COMPLETE
INSTRUCTIONS HERE
CRITIQUE GUIDELINES
CRITIQUE TIPS
HELP TOUR
1) You start with one credit so post your first piece of 1,000 words or less.

2) Receive critiques over a few weeks.

3) Read guidelines and critique another writer and earn 1 credit to post another 1,000 word or less piece.


4) Build up credits now by giving more critiques to be used at another time.
YOUR CREDITS
LOGIN HERE


ATTENTION:
Effective 8-27-15 submissions are now limited to 1,000 words or less and to a maximum of four submissions per month per member. See message to left for information.

TITLE: A Birthday Wish
By Robert Ford
11/02/07
  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND
This was written as a B-Day card for my twin daughters. I don't know if that is the appropriate word but that is what it was meant to be.
A Birthday Wish

This is a Birthday wish
From my heart I send to you
May God give you many blessings
That only he can do

May He guide you with his wisdom
May He bestow upon your heart
His love and compassion
On each day that you start

May He protect you from evil
As the Shepard does his flock
May His mercy be a port
Where you always safely dock

May He always be there
Whenever you call His name
May He lead you to heaven
May He keep you from eternal flame

As much as a Birthday wish
This also is a prayer
To tell you that I Love You
And how much I truly care

Happy Birthday
Dad
The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.