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TITLE: To My Lord
By Loulou G
07/12/07
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This is my first-ever attempt at writing verse. Its mainly for everyone and anyone wanting to express their feelings for our Saviour.
To My Lord

a secret place
hide me in,
Your love
envelopes,
comforts,
restores,
completes me.

Stained-glass sanctuaries,
no, not buildings,
of bricks and stones,
mere monuments,
no, Peace and Joy
are absent there.

I have wandered, unfaithfully,
through this, Your gift of Life,
squandered, betrayed,
Your trust, and yet
there You stand, waiting,
Your arms wide open,
for me!

On its knees, my soul
reaches out, seeks
for comfort, warmth,
more than these, yes;
so much more, for
restoration, completion,
for You.
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