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TITLE: Surrender
By Daniel Tichota
01/24/05
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Surrender to Me
all of who you are
for My ways are right
My burden is light.

Surrender to Me
whatever you do
you cannot go wrong
for My love is strong.

Surrender to Me
let go of your pride
and I will exalt
I’ll open my vault.

Surrender to Me
leave nothing for you
trust Me in My ways
give Me all your days.

Surrender to Me
everything you own
I will bring blessing
My praise you will sing.

Surrender to Me
I desire all
fall in arms of love
that catch from above.

Surrender to Me
My child of joy
together we’ll be
now walk strong with Me.
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