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TITLE: Thank You
By Mcken Wong
04/11/07
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A poem to thank the Lord for all He has done for us (:
I can never thank You enough,
For the love and joy you bring.
Not just into this cold heart of mine,
But to those that know You as King.

At times I have fallen short,
And gave Satan something to chew.
But You remained faithful,
Even though my prayers were far and few.

Though my heart may spell distraught,
But You injected hope inside me.
With a syringe called love,
So gentle the pain just had to flee.

Sometimes things just don’t go well,
And all paths lead to nowhere.
But they were chances to see Your miracles,
To know that You really care.

I still pray for my family,
As I yearn to see them receive.
The salvation which takes them from the grapple,
Of Satan and his useless beliefs.

I can never thank You enough,
For the blessings and guidance you bring.
Not just into this life of mine,
But to those that haven’t, or already have known You as King.
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