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TITLE: The Jounery
By kim hicks
02/03/07
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The man looks out the window pain watching the rain pour out on the shore of the land that is in need of every ounce it can hold on to in its grip.

The man feels his heart skip a beat knowing something that is calling out his name may he know the voice that calls him by name does he grab onto that name. He knows that name gave him refuge in time of need. He longs to know that voice by name his heart can stand and take that one by the hand and call him by name there is know other name above that name. He longs to be in his fathers arms once again look on to what his father has before him. He walks this street of confusion looking for the road that will set him free. He comes upon a church and finds a way in and sits in the back and feels his fathers arm around him holding him tight he looks around to know he smells a sweet smell of fresh air he has not smelled and a love in his heart that has torn down the wall in his heart that has been in place for a life time since the man was a boy. He longs to hear the song that sings a song in his heart. He hears a man say come my child and welcome home your father has been waiting for you lay your burden at the cross he gave his life for you. The man looks into the mans eyes and see a love that he never has seen the man reaches out his hand to the man with kindness a grip pulls on his heart. To lift him up to the life that is about to begin a walk into his father likeness that he will hear his father voice and see his face and seek to be like him. The man stands strong and seeks his father face and longs to go out and call out to his fellow brother in need to seek his father likeness.

That every man will hold on to what there heavenly father has showed them to be like him and seek his face and be like him there is know one in this world that holds the key to the man life except the one that new his name before he was conceived in his mother womb. He had a great plan called him out by name to be in the kingdom . That day on the man has not lost his love and every breath he has is song sung to are father that if you saw the waves dance in delight of the makers love, joy , kindness and many other gifts that are among all who see his face.

There is know other love like him so bring your heavy heart down to the cross who ever is heavy and laden and seek refuge he will lead and set you free he is always there in time to open his arms and set you free may you understand his love for you is no other. He reaches out with open arms and calls you out by name seeks you he has never changed we are the one that has changed and has held onto the things of the world .

I hope you will find the way he has made for you straight and long to be like him may he guide your path all days of your life.

Hope to see you there .
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