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TITLE: When I Think Of Jesus
By Paula Steele
01/29/07
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WHEN I THINK OF JESUS
When I think of Jesus....

I see fields of endless colors blooming with flowers of different beauty..

I capture a triple rainbow in the sky after a soft pitter patter shower..

I notice a bird nest with eggs ever so tiny..

I smile as I think of the new life within the soft shell..

I delight in whispers of curls on a babys head..

I enjoy puppies frolicking in the yard with little boys..

that carry the same carefree enthusiasm..

I watch with adoration at grandma and grandpa sitting on the porch holding hands..

so much in love..

When I think of Fields of flowers, triple rainbows..

bird nests with life living eggs inside..

baby curls..

puppies and little boys..

grandma and grandpa in love..

I SEE JESUS.

Paula Steele.

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