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TITLE: My Memory
By Robert Ford
07/28/06
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This was written for my ex- mother in law. She is the person that actually raised my twin daughters. I never told her she done an excellent job. Now my chance is gone. One of my daughters read this at her funeral. They themselves appreciated it very much. So did the rest of her family. Please tell me what you think
Watching over my children
When I felt I couldn’t
Rearranging your life
When I myself wouldn’t

Gave a gift from the heart
Something that can never be bought
The morals and values of life
By you to them was taught

I never stopped to tell you
How well the job was done
They’re healthy, happy and focused
You’re complimented by everyone

Whenever I hear their laughter
Your accomplishment rings clear
Now forever inside my heart
This memory I’ll hold so dear

Written By
Robert W. Ford
July 16, 2006
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