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TITLE: Feeling
By John Agoston
12/05/04
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Have had the scenario where something couldnt be more perfect but gets tainted by the past or something...
Feeling

You are mysterious like an angel
You are as beautiful as a cover girl
I wish you were my girl

Only heaven can see
What our relationship would be
Oh how marvelous it would be

If you could see
You may already see
Resisting it to be

This is why we shall never be
If I could show you and guarantee

That my love is true
I only want to be with you

Would you see
Would you be
Together with me

All this passion
All this compassion
Fuels my infatuation

So I analyze the situation
With you
I want to be forever
Without you
I want to be together

I will always care
I will always be fair
I will always be there
I feel this way
And I hope that You may
feel the same way
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