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TITLE: From Here
By Ricky Flowers
05/17/06
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From Here
By: Rick Flowers

From here I see no future
It is the journey’s end
From here there is no one
On who I can depend

From here the world seems dark
Empty, cold and unforgiving
From here there is no reason
For me to keep on living

From here the storm is gathering
Thunder, lightening and Rain
Upon my head it falls
No regard for my pain

From here I see no place to hide
No shelter from the storm
No shelter from the rain
No place to keep warm

Finally in desperation
I fell upon my knees
And whispered to the Father
Please God hear my plea

From here I just don’t know
If you can hear my prayer
From here I cannot see
If you are even there

In your hands I put my life
From this moment on
Your word says if I do
I will never be alone

Help me make it through
This storm life sent my way
From here I cannot know
The price I’ll have to pay

Whatever price there is
I’ll pay in any form
If you will only help me
Get beyond the storm.
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