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TITLE: Peace Come To Me
By james scarberry
05/09/06
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Peace come to me,
Peace be kind.
Please take away This hate in my mind.

Peace be gentle,
Peace be sweet.
Please come in And take a seat.

Peace like a river,
Peace like the sky.
Never ending when he flies.

The touch of his hand,
The love in my heart.
Creates a new day out of the dark.

But still the Pain comes,
And still do I fight.
The hate that hides withing the night

The night is below me,
And the light is above.
While heaven shines down with all of Gods love.

SGT. S
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