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TITLE: The Sky
By Robert Ford
04/25/06
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When I look up to the sky
I try to see farther up above
Hoping to see my Creator
Hoping to feel His infinite love
How much higher than that fluffy cloud
I wish I could hear Your voice
I wish I could hear it loud
I long for the day that we get to talk
When by Your side I get to walk
I hope that I am worthy
To stay with You there
Where I will not have a worry
A sorrow or a care
I know You had planned my life
Even before my mom gave birth
To do Your work that needs to be done
While I am living here on earth
Please give me strength and guidance
Please forgive me if I stray
I Pray You're happy with my work
On my judgment day

Written By
Robert W. Ford
AUG 27, 2005
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