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TITLE: A Plea
By Donald Newton
03/20/06
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My thanks to Fenny West, a writer on this site, for showing me this poem style. It is an Etheree, actually a double Etheree. It was a fun and challenging form to use.
God,
My God,
I need you.
You are awesome!
Draw me near to you.
Teach me Your commandments.
Help me find strength in Your word.
Let Your spirit fill me with joy.
May Your purpose for my life be clear.
Take hold of my heart and show me Your ways.
My spirit longs to do Your will always,
Showing others the way to be saved.
Witnessing for you, with my life.
May Your mercy flow through me
As I serve those in need.
Guide my thoughts I pray.
Keep my heart pure.
Be my friend,
Most Holy
God.
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