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TITLE: HEAVEN'S GATES OPEN WIDE
By Carrie Lyons
12/08/05
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This poem concerns a mother and her infant before the Lord take the child to heaven. Its purpose is to offer hope and consolation to the mother.
HEAVEN’S GATES OPEN WIDE

My child, my sweet baby, asleep in my arms,
Heaven's Gates open wide to accept this great charm.

I can't take you home for God's calling you now,
but reverence the Lord and at His throne you shall bow.

Safe and secure in God's presence you'll be
and someday He'll call Momma with thee.
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