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TITLE: The Lost Soul
By james scarberry
11/28/05
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Trapped inside a room,
with no way to escape.

The door is locked and rusted,
and the windows have no shape.

This World that I live in,
if that it can be called.

Has nothing good to offer,
while im trapped inside these walls.

Trapped inside this world,
with no way to escape.

Except to take my life,
and finally choose my fate.


SGT.S
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