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TITLE: Baby Awakenings
By Andria Cook
11/24/05
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On the day you were born, I held you in my arms,
I vowed to always love you, and keep you safe from harm,
I prayed for guidance, for peace, and for joy
I prayed that God give me the wisdom, to raise this precious boy.
To teach him love that doesn't depend on actions done,
To show him that no matter what, he would always be my son.

In that moment, I began to remember each mistake,
The tears flowed from my eyes, my body began to shake.
How could I fulfill this task in my life?
How could I be a mom, before I was a wife
But soon enough I learned, that to my faults you were blind,
you were so innocent, all of your thoughts were kind.

So together we grow, together we stand,
Together we face each challenge hand in hand.
You make my world go right, the reason I wake up every day,
I can only hope that you listen to what I say.
I pray for you each day, and in God's hands you're safe and sound,
I thank him for the special gift of purity I've found.
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